"Stormchaser, Stormshaper," by Erin Hoffman

[Scott H. Andrews]

This thread is to discuss "Stormchaser, Stormshaper," by Erin Hoffman, which appears in BCS Issue #14 (http://www.beneath-ceaseless-skies.com/toc.php?s=14) from Apr. 9, 2009.

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[adunsby]

Great use of language, great imagery. Usually when writers take risks with language some clunkers result, but none in this piece (maybe the ozone/tar simile, and I think "selfless" means unselfish, not having no sense of self). Good job of concisely creating a fantastical world. Most of us struggle with that. Unpredicable, too. All in all, just a great job. Really great.

[Tea]

Fabulous story.

[Unregistered]

Terrific.

JSR

[Unregistered]

Enjoyed this very much.
Am two for two with Beneath Ceaseless Skies now. - Lou Anders

[Scott H. Andrews]

Enjoyed this very much.
Am two for two with Beneath Ceaseless Skies now. - Lou Anders
Very glad you enjoyed it! Thanks very much for posting.