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Scott H. Andrews
07-28-2010, 09:48 PM
This thread is to discuss "Prashkina's Fire," by Vylar Kaftan, which appears in BCS #48 (http://www.beneath-ceaseless-skies.com/forums/../toc.php?s=48) from July 29, 2010.

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DgB
07-30-2010, 06:00 PM
I enjoyed this story. The ending really captured the underlined sentiment of the overall piece.

mbrennan
08-01-2010, 05:31 PM
Very nice! When Dishu said he didn't remember his father or grandfather, I guessed he would turn out to be a god, but that didn't detract from my enjoyment of the story. I think I would have liked a bit more from the ending; I can't put my finger on what I wanted from it, though.

Unregistered
08-03-2010, 10:42 PM
I'm really glad you both enjoyed the story. Thanks for commenting! --Vy

Ben Godby
08-05-2010, 04:51 PM
This was a great story. The imagery of the shattered temple felt so vivid and poignant, and the birth of Aradishu was a great conclusion. Awesome!

-bn

Unregistered
08-05-2010, 10:02 PM
Just lovely. A quick read which warmed my heart.

Ai-peng
07-19-2011, 11:39 AM
I have read this last year and today, re-read it, found the story as refreshing as ever. Thank you very much for sharing this story.