The Sword of Loving Kindness, Pt. I

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One storm-lashed sunset in the Eldshore’s antique capital, beneath Castle Astrolabe’s crumbling perch and near the Zodiac Coliseum’s bloody stones, Gaunt and Bone scaled Heaven’s Vault, there to make a hellish deposit.

Heaven’s Vault was a golden, six-sided tower lancing like an orphaned sunbeam through Archaeopolis’ sodden skies. Rectangular stained-glass windows glittered at intervals up its six hundred feet, each with a god’s portrait in the center, surrounded by lush scenes of that divinity’s life and death. In the corners of the windows there glowed ruby numbers, as if enumerating divine blood money.

“They are all dead, you know,” Imago Bone said within a gilded cloak, his invictium-tipped gloves scraping past the vast window of the Forge God, a blade of grass in his teeth recalling the world far below. “Or so it’s claimed. All the gods of the West. Those not embedded in the landscape, or too abstract to have form at all. Their blood stained this glass, with the blood of their high priests. And the Things beyond the glass killed them.”

“If this is meant to deter me,” Persimmon Gaunt said, clutching her rope beneath Bone, “I’m deterred. Turn back anytime you like.” Though I wish I’d been swayed at a lower altitude, she thought. Swaying at high altitude is hard on the stomach. Her sturdy body had been toughened by weeks of travel, but the long climb ached within her limbs, and chill winds swirled auburn hair into her eyes. Dangling there, she felt not unlike the rose tattooed upon her face, the one shown ensnared by a spider’s web.

“There’s no choice,” Bone said. “What we need is beyond this glass, that prophecy claims unbreakable.”

The poet answered him,

Neither liquid nor solid: such then is glass.

Stained with godblood and manblood, no one shall pass.

Thus trapped between natures, ‘twill never fault.

Eternal, the windows of Heaven’s Vault.

“Right,” Bone said. “That one.” The spare, ferret-like face of the thief frowned down, framed by two old scars, one from blade, one from flame. “I won’t ask again that you allow me to go alone. I merely ask that you respect the Pluribus. They are not seen much beyond this tower. But if tales are true they slew the old world, spawned the present age.”

“I understand.”

“I… do not want to lose you.” The momentary softness fled the thief’s scarred face as soon as it arrived. “Some perils must be mine alone. So you must do exactly as I say.”

“You do not own me, Bone.”

“You are free, Gaunt. I merely want you free and alive.”

They reached the upper right vertex of the great window, beside a number marking Allos the Smith’s assigned ranking among gods (thirteen), and the climbers secured themselves and readied their gear. Stray raindrops spattered the window, which glistened with the ruddy flourishes of sunset. Godblood was, it seemed, composed of all the spectrum’s colors, but with a marked bias toward the red.

Bone removed his gloves. “The gem, if you please.”

Gaunt slid from her index finger the ring they’d stolen from the delvenfolk of Loomsberg. It took the shape of a silver ouroboros serpent, with a crook in its self-devoured tail, and a frosty gem within the crook.

“A ring of Time,” she said, passing it up. “And time, perhaps, to tell me the plan.”

Bone took the ring and tested it, plucking the grass blade from his teeth and flicking it across the gem. Green coiled into brown, blew away as dust, the remnants scattering to the street. None of the hustling wayfarers beside the Vault noted the incident, nor perceived the climbers in gilded cloaks that mimicked the tower’s stones. Indeed, for all their civic pride, the Archaeopolitans preferred to act as though the Vault did not exist.

“We could live a year,” Bone mused, “on the value of this gem. Captain Dawnglass would want it for piracy, the kleptomancers for research, Dolman the Charmed to create false relics. Yet it’s merely the tool for a larger caper.” He sighed. “This is my master heist, Gaunt. I spent decades sketching it, as a sort of hobby, never supposing I’d actually try something so mad.” He gazed if for the final time at the grey sea surging westward; then he smiled. “That is the effect you have on me.”

For you, Bone, she thought, that was a love poem.

But he had turned back to the window of the god-eaters.

He put the ouroboros upon his ring finger, pressed it to the glass.

The gem shimmered and diminished, and simultaneously the world blurred.

Bone shuddered. Hair sprouted upon his face. Grey strands appeared on his head. His clothes frayed. So did the rope.

“Bone….”

“A moment.” Bone shimmered back into solidity, and the gem was gone. Was his voice a trifle weary? “A moment, a year… so little difference to a ring of clotted Time. So little difference to me. Heh. But most of its influence was directed outward, Gaunt, at this window.”

Was the window’s luster gone, its surface drab and colors flat? “What have you done?” Gaunt asked.

“Don’t worry, I’m fine. Just a little temporal backwash. But the window, now… well, a thief appreciates loopholes. Glass is indeed something between liquid and solid, but old glass with impurities has been known to divitrify and become a solid in truth. So I wonder if the prophecy still applies to crystal….”

Bone donned his clawed gloves, scraped, and grinned.

Soon he’d created a gap a few feet across in the corner of the Forge God’s window. He carefully lowered a crystal disc into the darkness of the tower, sliding it to one side.

“Well done,” said Gaunt, peering up into the Vault’s shadows. “But was it necessary to keep me in the dark?”

Bone looked at her. There were lines beside his eyes, as if a few more crows had danced there. “You are not as skilled at evasion as I. You might have been caught and questioned by delvenfolk, or eldguards, or infraseers.”

“You were afraid I’d stop you, weren’t you?”

He coughed. “Perhaps. I could not predict the severity of the temporal backwash. And you have so many years left.”

She reached up and grasped his wrist. “Give me this moment, and this road, and this sky. That is enough. Never give me lies.”

He smirked. “I am glad it’s enough, since you’ve enumerated most of our possessions.” He studied the narrow gap, patted his stomach. “For once I’m glad we’ve had little to spend on food.”

Gaunt shook her head. “Think of it. We are down to our last gold ambrosian, and bear an infernal burden.” She cocked her head toward her pack, which bore the reason for their adventure. “And now we are breaking into one of the world’s most dangerous places.”

“Don’t tell me you aren’t enjoying it.”

She laughed and mimed an unchaste kiss. “After you, master thief.”

The Vault’s windows were for the outside world’s benefit. The beings within had no requirement of light, and although ruddy illumination streamed through the windows, shadows were plentiful. Once within, Gaunt and Bone sought their dubious concealment and took the Vault’s measure.

Their first realization was that Heaven’s Vault was in a sense two towers: a citadel of black stone perhaps fifty feet in diameter, nestled within the shell of the golden-hued exterior. A narrow, sloping passageway separated the two.

Upon the ebon stone of the inner tower there appeared, at regular intervals, narrow doors of still darker metal resembling slabs of congealed night. Spindly glyphs, like a sequence of mad spiders’ webs, etched the walls beside.

“Purest agonium,” Bone said after a sniff of the door-metal. “Formed, it’s said, in the hearts of draconic suicides. I’d best not touch it.”

“The language of the lost isle of Nobeca,” Gaunt said, squinting at the writing beside the door. “I’d best read it.” Clicking her tongue, she said, “A free translation might be ‘clam, ennui, knucklebone.’“

“So,” Bone said, scratching his chin, “beyond lies a talisman that puts mollusks to sleep?”

“No, Bone. My translation makes no sense because the language employed is not Nobecan, but our own tongue of Roil.”

Bone frowned at her, then at the arcane squiggles. “You could have fooled me. But then the light is dim….”

“The Nobecan symbols are here used to represent the sounds of Roil. You see, Nobecan is ideographic, not alphabetic. The glyphs with the meanings ‘clam,’ ‘ennui,’ and ‘knucklebone,’ possessed in the original tongue the sounds ‘slaw,’ ‘terr,’ and ‘dairk.’“

“‘Hm. Slaw-terr-dairk. Slaw-ter-dark. Slaughterdark?” Bone’s eyebrows rose. “The pirate lord? Could this be his deposit box?”

Persimmon Gaunt could almost see the fires lighting behind Bone’s forehead, illuminating storied hoards of Summerlong wine, Karthagarian gold, Wallander silk.

“That creature was the terror of three continents,” Bone murmured, his hand drifting despite his own warning toward the dark panel. “I absorbed all his legends as a boy. He retired as a prince to a desert outpost—what would he lock away here?”

A thousand miles east in the city of pain, a girl tending a weed-choked garden shivered beneath a desert moon, as if a cold western wind whispered her name….

Gaunt caught Bone’s hand. “This isn’t our goal.”

Her lover sighed. “Correct. We are not stealing, this day.” He beckoned up the winding passage. “The unoccupied boxes should be this way.”

“A moment.” Gaunt studied the crystal disc they’d dropped in the passageway, its edges marked with red powder, flecked with blues, golds, greens, and yellows. She rubbed the mouth of a pouch along its circumference. “Powdered godblood,” she said, “might just be of value.”

“Audacious,” Bone said. “Well played. You carry the stuff.”

They crept upward the equivalent of two stories, passing dark portals labeled for wizards, heroes, monsters, and lunatics, before they discovered the Vault had a guardian.

A huge golden sphere rolled into view. Bearing down, it made not a rumbling, but a sticky-sounding hiss.

To Gaunt it resembled nothing so much as a globe of frozen honey, just wide enough to dominate the passage. Like drops of blood, bubbles within glinted with the window-light. Yet this was not its most lurid aspect, for within quivered the severed heads of three men, bobbing as though the interior were viscous yet. The rolling heads stared at Gaunt and Bone, their eyes tracking the new victims, their mouths gaping wide as if shrieking silent warning.

“Flee!” Bone yelled.

Gaunt tarried, as much from shock as from a desire to protect her companion. The golden sphere rolled closer.

Cursing, Bone shifted to the nearest black door, jabbing glove-claws deep into the seam between metal and stone.

The door popped. Bone swung it and blocked the way, even as the agonium corroded the claws down to smoking flecks.

The sphere hit the enchanted metal; Bone fell backward into Gaunt. The globe steamed into sweet-smelling vapor, filling the passage with a tantalizing odor as of life’s finest meal, now over.

Before the door swung back Gaunt glimpsed the chamber beyond. There glinted a dented brass lamp, a carved pumpkin brooding atop a saddle, a pale girl immobile within a glass coffin. Then the deposit box and its mysteries were closed off forever.

Three heads flopped now upon the floor like fresh trout, drawing Gaunt’s gaze. They were aging swiftly. Their skins became ash, and the skulls beneath followed suit. Before they were gone, however, Gaunt thought she heard them whisper, Our thanks….

“An ambrosia globe,” Bone said. “A head within goes on living, in misery, nourished by divine honey. I told you to flee.”

“I was startled. And I couldn’t leave you.”

He frowned. “We must hone your self-preservation skills.”

“You’re welcome.”

“Your death would serve no one, Persimmon Gaunt!” Bone shook his head. “You affect a certain world-weariness, but you are a romantic. You must learn proper selfishness.”

“Selfishly I ask, quit the lecture.” Hands on hips, she said, “Of more immediate concern, how many times can you repeat that trick with the door?”

Bone grunted, looked away, removed his smoking gloves. “I had only one set of invictium claws.”

“May I borrow what remains?”

“They’re nearly useless. But be my guest.”

She slipped on the gloves, which still bore remnants of the enchanted metal. “Let’s go.”

Their luck improved. They found their goal just around the bend: the first door lacking an inscription.

Bone withdrew a pair of daggers, slipping the blades between metal and stone. Immediately the weapons corroded. Bone discarded smoldering hilts.

He removed a strand of ironsilk, shaking it once for stiffness, and slipped it into the crack. A line of sizzling ruin lashed out toward Bone’s hands, and he dropped the remnant of the strand.

He raised a jagged shard of magnetite on a string, swung it against the agonium. The shard failed to stick, and the tip smoked and crumbled. Scowling, Bone touched the stone to a ruined dagger-hilt. It clicked, but did not cling. “Gaunt,” he said petulantly, “this vile metal has neutralized my lodestone!”

“Hold. I have a notion….”

Gaunt used the gloves with their invictium shards to trace a Nobecan character beside the door.

Bone winced at the scraping and screeching. “Shall I just call out a challenge to the Pluribus?”

“Hush.”

“That was the gist, yes.”

“This won’t take but a moment. There.”

She had finished inscribing the Nobecan glyph for balance.

In the original tongue it sounded much like Gaunt.

“I am Gaunt,” she told the black door.

With a grinding noise and a waft of cool air, it swung aside.

Bone raised his eyebrows. “I must give you a bigger share of our hauls.”

“We haven’t been stealing anything.”

“Exactly what I’ve been saying. Let’s finish our task and go rob a drunk.”

They peered into the chamber, a dark, hollow space that echoed with their breathing. Gaunt opened her pack and produced an unmarked book with a drab cover.

“Rot in there,” she whispered, and tossed within the tome known only as Mashed Rags Bound in Dead Cow.

That was when the air seemed to come alive.

THIEVES!” came a maddening cry, as though a thousand voices shrieked all around.

Gaunt shivered, but did not freeze. She spun and unsheathed her own daggers, fine steel from Tancimor.

She became aware of a dark-robed figure behind her. Even as she turned, it lashed out with both hands—or rather, what she had believed were hands. Their touch was light, yet both her wrists sang with pain. She dropped her blades.

Meanwhile Bone had found his own weapon. It was more unorthodox; he flung a waterskin at the hooded shape.

The skin just missed the head, but burst against the wall, spattering their foe.

It buzzed with rage.

For it was a swarm of bees that filled the cloak, and with their central cognitive squadron drenched, the rest spilled in all directions like golden drops of anger.

“I’m fleeing!” Gaunt said, preempting Bone, but even as she scrambled downslope she encountered a second hooded figure droning in accusation, and beyond it a third. She skidded to a halt, and thus Bone collided with her, herded as he was by another pair of shrouded swarms. The lovers fell against each other, and huddled.

Their original accuser(s) flowed back into the abandoned robe, filled it, and billowed up to the ceiling. Gaunt marveled how light the robe must be, or how strong the bees. Then she marveled that she and Bone yet lived.

Down pointed a finger formed of intertwined insects, quivering with legs, wings, and antennae.

We are the Teller,” buzzed the voice of myriad wings. “We speak for the Pluribus. We have eaten gods. It demeans us to consume thieves. But it’s more efficient than showing you the door.

Many times Imago Bone had been surprised by Persimmon Gaunt, but never more so than today.

“We are not thieves, O Pluribus!” cried she.

He opened his mouth to object, reflected a moment, shut it again.

“We fear you,” Gaunt was saying, “who rebelled against the very gods, who never fairly paid you for nectar and ambrosia. We respect you, whose Deicide allowed mortals to dominate the West. We honor you, who originated the art of banking. And we come to you now as would-be customers.”

Bone gave her one look of perfect perplexity, then followed in languid tones, “My colleague speaks the truth.”

You are Imago Bone,” the Teller said, pointing a crawling “finger” at Bone’s nose. A single bee detached itself for emphasis, orbiting Bone’s head. Larger than a honeybee, it was elongated in a way that resembled wasps, and flashed a metallic shade of gold, with bristles reminiscent of spikes. “We have tiny eyes in many places.

“You know me?” Bone said, with a quaver of pride.

“We were not stealing,” Gaunt said, “despite my friend’s reputation. We were leaving something behind.”

The Teller withdrew its arm. It and its comrades rippled in consternation.

You were making a deposit?”

Eyes on the circling bee, Bone said, “There is a deadly enchanted book in our care, the legacy of our first meeting.” He glanced at Gaunt, recalling their escape from kleptomancers, goblin librarians, and the two deaths Joyblood and Severstrand who’d so weirdly circumscribed and extended his life. And he remembered the cost of that escape—employing Mashed Rags Bound in Dead Cow, a book that killed all who absorbed so much as a paragraph. “We do not want it, but its disposal falls to us. While we search for the means, we must ensure it doesn’t fall into evil hands.”

The Teller seemed to scowl. The thief perceived skittering, many-legged eyebrows. “You dread this bane so much? You would destroy it, not sell it? You, a thief?”

He’d asked himself this before. “We like to sleep well at night,” he said, though he added silently that he slept best beside Gaunt, and craved her continued affection. “We deprive others of wealth. Not, as a rule, of life.”

You would rent a security comb?” The Teller’s tone remained incredulous. “The standard fee is ten ambrosians a month.”

Bone revealed a single gold coin, stamped with the arms of the Empress of the Eldshore, bearing a single drop of dried ambrosia at its punctured center. “We have only one available. Why do you suppose we broke in?” One ambrosian was standard yearly pay for a soldier. It could be traded for numerous lesser coins, and slipped beneath the tongue it had an even chance of reviving a man from a mortal wound. To Gaunt and Bone the coin, a gift from the pirate captain Dawnglass, represented one last long step before destitution. They’d lived on scraps and odd jobs to avoid trading it.

“Bone?” Gaunt whispered. “Self-preservation? Eh?”

The Teller smiled, a grin composed of tiny black feet stained with cream-white pollen. “One? We store crown jewels, dragon-hunters’ hoards, sorcerers’ hearts, mummies and vampires, papyri of the Blind Poet, rings of power, soul-stealing swords, and a cat in an indeterminate state between life and death. The mighty of the West entrust their treasures to us. And you have but one coin?

Bone licked his lips at this inventory, but he composed himself. “A down payment?”

Gaunt put in, “You know the reputation of Imago Bone. We offer a down payment of one ambrosian, plus the master thief’s services in the acquisition of your choice.”

“We do?” Bone murmured.

“Hush.”

We must confer.

The cloaks of the Pluribus dropped to the floor. The divine bees converged upon a nearby window and formed a writhing tapestry of gold-knifed darkness.

“Flee?” Gaunt whispered, with little conviction.

“Our only real option’s a plunge to the street,” Bone replied. “Though we could hide in the open security comb.”

“With the book we’ve struggled to destroy! Oh good!”

“If anything could harm the Pluribus….”

At that moment the swarms dispersed and dressed themselves, with two blocking the path toward the book, and the Teller once again overhead. Gaunt and Bone would never know if the Pluribus had reacted to their words.

The Teller spread wiggling gold-black hands in a magnanimous gesture.

Congratulations, new customers! We are flexible beings, and offer a special arrangement. There is a service you might do. For this, and your deposit, we will waive the cost of our damaged window and offer forty-nine weeks’ use of a security comb.”

“Ask,” Bone said with widening eyes, “and we’ll steal the spots off the sun.”

An interesting proposal. But we have no theft in mind. Indeed, you will do as you did here, delivering an item of value.”

“Speak on.”

We guard many wondrous things. There is one such whose renter has defaulted. We would have you dispose of it. Do you agree?”

“What are the details…?” Gaunt began.

“Of course!” Bone said.

Very well,” said the Teller. “You shall convey the world’s most perilous weapon to the city of pain.”

The Teller escorted them to the gap in the window of Allos the Smith, Gaunt glaring at Bone the whole while.

To forestall her speech, Bone mused aloud, “Most perilous weapon, eh? The sword Crypttongue, that speaks in its victims’ voices?”

No,” said the Teller. Gaunt’s scowl intensified.

“The Schismglass of Baelscaer, then, that entraps souls in its reflective blade?”

No.”

The Teller stopped beside the door Gaunt and Bone had first encountered, the one named for a pirate prince.

All who possess this weapon have regretted it, even the fiercest of killers, mad Lord Runestock, say, or bloody Sir Fairbeast, or Captain Slaughterdark who abandoned it here.

At the word Slaughterdark the door swung open, revealing a glowing nimbus of a pinkish hue, festooned with sparkles and rainbows.

Behold the Sword of Loving Kindness.”

Far to the east a girl heard words upon the wind: I am coming. The voice was dulcet and dainty, and seemed ready to burst into song.

The girl shivered there, in her desert.

On the eighteenth day of their journey from Archaeopolis to Maratrace, called the city of pain, Gaunt grew certain something was amiss.

The initial signs had been small. Imago Bone’s normal grumbling irritation at rocks and bumps in the royal road was replaced with a cheery, cloying whistle. The whistle did not cease when the road did, and it echoed maddeningly through the precipitous mountain path. Bone’s usual haphazard way of pitching camp gave way to a tidy pattern of tent, fire, and packs, all arranged according to ancient Palmarian geomantic principles. His habitual lustful manner surrendered to a chaste, schoolboy friendliness. Even this last transformation was not so alarming at first, as it gave Gaunt more time to attack her latest work, The Next-To-Last-Winter:

‘Tis the loveliest of seasons (she wrote on the seventeenth day)

A winter bright, my friend.

Not least among the reasons:

The next will have no end.

Yet on the eighteenth day, Gaunt, breathing in sharp cold mountain air and trying to scoop up the delicious thrill of that penultimate snow and melt it into words, was interrupted by Bone’s latest musing.

“I am not so good a thief, you know.”

Gaunt’s writing hand froze, pleasant ice-scapes forgotten. She stared at him.

“Most of my escapades,” he continued, chewing a blade of snow-crusted alpine grass, “were lucky escapes.”

Was this some filchform, Gaunt wondered, who had eaten her beloved? Or a sorcerer who’d spirited Bone away and left a fragment of the Brazen Mirror?

“Ah, think of it, Gaunt. I grow old, and never have I tended a garden, raised a child, run for civic office.”

Here he absently patted the weapon from which he never wandered far. It was a rapier with a hilt sculpted like a rose blossom, its whole length an unearthly pink crystal which sparkled and flashed prismatic reflections at the merest hint of sunlight. Delicate and sharp, even its rose petals drew blood.

“Why,” Bone continued, “what must people think? What sort of image do I present? I’ve never dwelled long in one spot, you know, Gaunt, never had a house I could show off to the neighbors.”

“Bone,” Gaunt said, “you are frightening me.”

“I frighten myself,” Bone said agreeably. “To think, I could have spent my life so much better! I might have been a fine physician, student of law—a courtier even! A man of substance!”

“Have you been drinking, Imago Bone?”

“No!” The thief stood, the Sword of Loving Kindness in hand. “Would that I had! A little drink is a social necessity. Instead, I went through long dry spells and sporadic mad binges. Better to raise the occasional stiff drink in the company of peers and patrons. I….” Bone’s brow furrowed. “What… what is wrong with me?”

“Bone,” she said, coming closer, relieved at this change. “Are you yourself?”

“It… it is like dreaming another’s dream. I… what a foolish sentence. A pathetic attempt at poetry. Which reminds me, Gaunt,” Bone continued, all confusion leaving his voice, “I’ve been thinking you should give up verse.”

“What?”

“It is well enough for wise ancients to practice the art, but today’s women should know better. If you must write, perhaps then an etiquette primer for young girls—what are you doing?”

Stooping, Gaunt said, “I am forming a bird out of snow. If I whisper a wish into its ear it will fly away when my back is turned, and bring happiness and prosperity to my friends.”

“Well… a bit whimsical, but all in all a good, kind sentiment. I should think—ow!”

Having packed the snowball hard, Gaunt had hurled it into Bone’s earnest face.

The thief dropped the weapon. Gaunt kicked it downslope, where it lay against a leafless tree, shining as if reflecting an unseen, glorious sunset.

Bone dropped to his knees. “Thank you,” he gasped.

“It was more for me than you.”

“I hope I haven’t lost this eye.” Bone checked. “No. I can see. But more important. I can think—of pride and greed, for example. Of me. Remind me what the Pluribus said about the Sword?”

Gaunt said, “They were rather cryptic. Especially as you’d already agreed to their errand.” She shot him a fresh glare, then added, “I’ve given this a little thought. This may be the whispered final work of the Forge God. A weapon fashioned after most of the gods perished… even his beloved Nettileer Kinbinder.”

“The goddess of love?”

“My bardic teachers suggested I not think of her office as love per se. That is too multifaceted a thing to be embodied in a single entity. Nettileer’s function was kinbinding. She presided over courtship and marriage, childrearing and housekeeping, personal grooming and blood feuds.”

“Blood feuds?”

Gaunt studied the sword as she spoke. “She was not a force for good, necessarily, Bone. Her priestesses did not help the poor and sick, but rather dressed up in fanciful pastel outfits with tiaras. They held lavish balls. They bestowed wishes upon their friends and poison upon their enemies. Kin, cleanliness, status, appearance, chaste affection—that was Nettileer’s realm, and woe to those who angered her. Her husband Allos the Smith suffered much at her hands.”

“Ah,” Bone said. “He must have dallied with another, as gods often did.”

“No. He failed to keep his forge clean, embarrassing her in front of the other divinities.”

“Oh.”

“For this she shoved his face into the coals and cast him away, taking up with the war god Erethor.”

“I see.” Bone straightened his clothing.

“But that wasn’t the end of their story,” Gaunt said, “for one day the Pluribus rebelled and killed almost all the gods. There’s a song, a fragment from the Bladed Isles—

Gold was the godswarm

And red the halls of Surmount

And black the blade of Erethor

As Nettileer he sought.

 

And swarm-spattered was his sword

When goddess’ hand he got

And led her to the ramparts

And the chariot of the god.

 

But “Would you flee to other worlds?”

Said she, “To draw a coward’s breath?”

Berserk she goaded Erethor.

He charged foaming to his death.

 

Then red rose the mane of Nettileer

As to stones leapt she of hearth.

Red ran her blood, that Allos took,

To quench a thing of wrath.

“It is said,” Gaunt said, “that Allos flung this final work into the sea before the Pluribus found him. Taletellers long wondered what it was. I think I have a guess. I think it was this sword, which so perfectly matches the goddess’ nature.”

She stared down the slope. “Think of it, Bone. The final vengeance of the gods is not a thing of thunderbolts or gore, but something forged with the essence of the kinbinder. Something that bludgeons mind and spirit… until one obeys Nettileer’s notions of a clean, shiny life.”

“A cosmic spanking rod,” Bone said. “Why couldn’t we have gotten something that ate souls?”

Again the girl felt something cold and delicate kiss her neck and whisper Skath. Again she turned and saw nothing but the proud expanse of Maratrace beneath the desert sun.

 But the voice on the wind was stronger now, as were her nightly dreams of a dainty pink sword. Almost she clawed herself in the manner of her people, but limited herself to biting her lip.

Bone and Gaunt resolved to carry the sword in a pack, and handle it only with cloth. Even so, their journey was marked by incidents of a most disturbing wholesomeness.

In the Homunculus Mountains, they found themselves lecturing the Mandrake Marauders on manners and hygiene. Their subsequent dash into the Vale of Webness led to a debate with Poisonfroth Huskmaker, matriarch of the Oldspinners, in which Gaunt accused her of haphazard webmaking, and Bone chided her unfinished meals.

This exchange degenerated into the unfortunate scene of two humans fleeing a be-webbed and burning forest. As the blaze spread onto the Wheelgreen, Gaunt and Bone argued with the Wagonlords, who disputed the notion that the grassfire might inspire their founding agricultural communities with pretty gardens.

When at last the pair reached the reed-marked, quietly churning river that flowed south and east to Maratrace, and the threat of being bound and blood-smeared and left for the ants had faded into anecdote, Gaunt and Bone held a conference.

“Damn this sword,” Bone spat.

“Language,” Gaunt objected. Then she caught herself, and swore.

“You see?” Bone said. “The thing’s influence is growing. We will be lucky to arrive as anything but pedants of good behavior.”

“Look, Bone. Look at the verse I wrote yesterday.”

He looked.

Oh, happy children at their song

Frolicking the winter long,

For in their joyous hearts they know

They lie, who warn of endless snow.

“You think this is a disaster?” Bone asked. “I’ve discarded my gear. My daggers and lockpicks, my camouflage dyes and knockout herbs, my ironsilk lines and sticky resins. Years to assemble, all gone—abandoned on the plains or tossed into the river! Each time, I thought, ‘Farewell, wicked tool.’ Only when it’s too late do I weep.”

Gaunt patted herself and cursed (“Bless it all!”) to discover she too had disarmed herself. She embraced Bone, leaning in closer when she found the initial result too chaste. “Well, fear not. Adventuring is done for now. We must merely deliver this artifact to Maratrace. There is no designated recipient, no specified act or ritual to perform. We may walk through the gates, drop the thing on the street, and leave.”

“You are right. We could even approach by night and hurl it over the wall.”

“And flee at once for Amberhorn on the Midnight Sea, where sin is state-supported, where thieves’ markets come thick as the harbor’s billowing sails.”

“Yes. Yes! You are a healing draught, Persimmon Gaunt.”

Bone kissed her. She responded eagerly, and his breathing grew labored. How long, she wondered, since they had behaved so? Too long indeed—since the fifteenth day out of Archaeopolis.

They clutched at one another, pulled each other to the ground, unfastened, tugged, tore, and lay naked in the tall grass. The scent of mud and sweat was rich. Their hands sought their unchaperoned flesh….

And they paused, regarding one another in vexation.

“I am finding myself mortified,” Gaunt said slowly, “to be so exposed, before the hawks, the field mice, and whatever astronomers might exist on other heavenly discs.”

“I find myself thinking,” Bone murmured, “that this cavorting is rather brutish, and far beneath the dignity of a great poet and a thief whose name is at least known to high society.”

The pair turned their heads and looked upon the Sword of Loving Kindness. It had tumbled from its pack, and now shimmered pleasantly beside them.

They still lay that way when a trading boat arrived, making its way from cold Starkinggrad downriver. The hoots and whistles of the crew sent them diving for their clothes, and they barely mustered the audacity to beg a ride to Maratrace.

It was no city for sightseers.

First, grotesque dark towers, resembling broken-boned monstrosities covered with pustules, rose on the horizon. These were followed by smaller, angular pyramidal buildings like wide knives, then a conglomeration of adobe houses low by the river. Trails of smoke testified to activity, farmland stretched up and down the river, and watercraft bobbed beside piers; but there was a hush about the place that Gaunt did not like.

As the riverboat creaked cityward, sliding above the sunken rubble of older settlements, its captain said, “All mad they are, indeed,” as if reading her thoughts. “But honest dealers nonetheless. Too honest, in a way.” He was a Palmarian namedFlea, with two fingers missing from his right hand, testament to avarice or clumsiness. (Gaunt was oddly proud Bone’s hands were intact even after a long career in Palmary.)

“What do you mean?” Bone said with a flaring of the fingers that implied reward for information (and emphasized, Gaunt knew, that he had all ten.)

Flea cupped his own maimed hand, accepting with a grunt a minor coin. “They’re fanatics, friend. They believe pain’s the great truth of the world, and they labor to provide their own evidence.” Flea pocketed the coin, lifted his hand. “Palmary’s proudest had to shackle me to do this. But Maratrace’s mighty do the same to themselves, or worse. And outsiders who linger become pain-lovers too. I know a few old river-hands who are short a hand or two, these days. Me, I’ll be leaving in one—down to Mirabad. Best you come along. If you can’t afford it, you can work for passage.”

A glance at the morose faces of Flea’s oarsmen, chained by wrist and nose, convinced Gaunt she’d rather walk.

A tsking Flea deposited them at Maratrace’s modest port district. Unusually for a city of tall towers, Maratrace’s harbor did not throb, but rather snored. Activity was faint. Where other docklands would echo with the cries of drunks, lechers, and brawlers, this one clicked with the lackadaisical sounds of dice upon the piers. It seemed the traders clung to the water’s edge.

There was no city wall as such. Wooden harbor-sheds blended with adobe homes and stone pyramids, the city growing by turns more austere toward its center; and despite their intent to abandon the sword immediately, it was unclear to Gaunt and Bone if they were truly inside Maratrace or not. They ventured inward.

They soon found themselves upon hot, hushed, shadow-slashed avenues of white sand, slicing between close-set buildings. To Gaunt, the city seemed the work of two diametrically opposed architects. Most structures, those meant for business or habitation, sat stark, smooth, and angular, reminding her of tombs. This much was strange but hardly daunting. It was the other constructions, the public and military buildings, which cast monstrous shadows. They clawed skyward like the citadels of genius termites. Within the limits of engineering they were asymmetrical and rough-hewn, crafted to suggest diseased and disfigured creatures. The tallest structure, ebon and windowless but in outline oddly reminiscent of Heaven’s Vault, flowed with intricate carvings depicting humans and other sapients undergoing torture. Beneath it, children played.

Gaunt led Bone nearer the children, who represented the largest knot of activity in sight. So far, other citizens had clung to the shadows, slipping indoors as the poet and thief passed by. Gaunt had only been able to discern that the Maratracians were surprisingly pale for desert-dwellers, and that many were maimed as if veterans of some ugly battle.

“We might as well inform someone what we’re doing,” Gaunt said, worried that her scruples were generated by the sword, but unable to act otherwise.

The older children played catch with a wooden octahedron bristling with little spikes. Usually the children avoided the hazards, but occasionally a sharp cry went up.

Heat and distraction had made Gaunt stupid; but when she finally understood the meaning of the latest yelp, she ran toward a fallen boy.

He cradled a bleeding palm. His cohorts gathered around him, silently watching.

Bone slid onto the sand and grabbed the boy’s hand. Perhaps fourteen, the victim was long and lean of face, brown-haired and brown-eyed, and stared as though Bone were a particularly unbelievable desert mirage.

“Let him help,” Gaunt implored in the language of Amberhorn, a far place, but not so distant as the homes of other tongues she knew.

The boy regarded her in silence, but his gaze was intent, perhaps even expectant.

Bone applied a tourniquet from his pack, and strong alcohol from his flask. The boy hissed as the liquor stung, then narrowed his eyes with a peculiar, satisfied look.

Again in Amberhornish, Gaunt said, “Where are your parents? Or your guardians?” She pointed angrily at the spiked ball. “Why do they allow such playthings?”

No one answered. Slowly, Gaunt grew aware of the collection of scars and bandages on the impassively staring children. One boy lacked half an ear, the wreckage neatly trimmed. One girl wore a patch over one eye, the fabric bearing a ghastly symbol. It recalled the familiar skull-and-crossbones of pirates, yet depicted a severed head and arms, all covered in flesh.

“Does no one speak Amberhornish?” Gaunt called out. “Roil? Eldshoren?”

“We understand you,” said the boy with the wounded hand, in careful Amberhornish. “We learn this language in school. We’re supposed to know the tongues of future conquests.”

Bone avoided the obvious question, asked instead, “Then why did you not answer?” The thief finished his ministrations, and the boy flexed his hand with a grim smile.

“Your questions make no sense,” he replied. “We are children. Why should we not play?”

At this point another cry arose. A plump, tanned girl of around twelve barreled toward them, sandals slapping the sand, dirty brown hair flailing about her intense dark eyes. Had Gaunt imagined a sentient sandstorm, there would have been a resemblance. Girl collided with boy with in what seemed both tackle and embrace, weeping. He, in turn, detached himself but swatted her shoulder in amused condescension. “Skath, Skath, Skath. What are we to do with you? It’s just a little blood.”

“Siblings?” Bone murmured to Gaunt.

“Yes,” she said. “The mix of anger and affection is telling.”

The girl Skath looked up at the strangers. Worry twisted her face. She took Gaunt and Bone by the hand and nodded urgently down the white street. “Come!” she declared in Amberhornish. “You must hurry.”

“A welcoming committee at last,” Bone quipped in Roil, as they consented to be led. “But we must dispose of the sword.”

“Perhaps this girl can introduce us to officialdom,” Gaunt said in kind. “The weapon’s emanations make me want to deliver it to proper channels. Also, I am having difficulty refusing an invitation. It’s impolite, after all.” She shrugged helplessly.

“We are wanted thieves in Palmary, Archaeopolis, and Loomsberg,” Bone sighed, “and now we’re compelled to knock at all doors, and wipe our feet. Next we’ll be sending thank-you notes to every noble we’ve robbed.”

They followed Skath. After some hesitation her brother tagged along, taunted by his contemporaries’ laughter.

“A strange city,” Bone observed in Roil. “The size and condition of the buildings imply wealth, and despite their scars the children are well-clothed and fed. Yet all doors stand open, all save those of the great tower, where I saw no opening. Nor do I see city guards, or private muscle….”

“But there are those….” Gaunt jabbed an elbow at a side street, toward one of the smaller grotesque towers. Below, figures in drab grey robes gathered in discussion. They glanced at the foreigners. “They look ominous.”

“They cannot hurt you,” Skath piped up in Amberhornish, proving she understood more than the outlanders realized.

“Because we are outsiders?” Gaunt asked in the same tongue.

“They are not allowed,” Skath said. “No one in Maratrace can hurt anyone else.”

“A lovely sentiment,” said Bone.

“But they want to. They all want to hurt you.” With this she strode into a two-story pyramid.

She led them through the first story, one single large room adorned with bright wall-hangings and colorful sitting pillows, where in one corner lurked a sculpture like an iron sea-urchin with spines of irregular length. The tips had a rusty look. A stairway led to a deeper, cooler level. Another sliced along three walls and led to the roof, and it was up these stairs the girl marched.

They attained a square rooftop rimmed with flower beds, with a rustling white canopy on rickety stilts offering shade. A watering pot creaked in the dry wind; weeds choked the flower beds. A dry, sharp smell accompanied the weeds.

Skath scanned the garden, nodded to herself, and plucked a dandelion. She handed it to Gaunt with slow ceremony.

“I am Skath,” she said. “I keep lots of gardens, here and there. I like the plants people call weeds. Most people think I’m crazy. Have a dandelion.”

“I am… Lepton,” Gaunt said, accepting the white puff. She chose an Amberhornish word meaning thin or light, preferring Skath know the sense of her name rather than the sound. Also, it was just as well her true identity went unspoken. “This is, um, Osteon,” she added, nodding to Bone, and passing the dandelion to him. He bowed. White seeds drifted behind him, from the canopy’s shadow into the blazing sunlight.

“This is Skower,” Skath said with a toss of her shoulder.

Her brother made a scoffing noise.

“Skath,” Gaunt said. “Who rules your city?”

The girl’s smile froze. She looked away to her weeds.

“We are returning something to Maratrace,” Bone added. “May we show you?”

“Um, Osteon….”

“I feel that we must—Lepton.”

Skath nodded uncertainly at Bone’s question, and he set the dandelion atop the roof’s wall, removed the shrouded sword, unwound the cloth. Prismatic flashes and ruby light painted the air.

Skower hissed. Skath merely stared.

“The Sword of Loving Kindness,” Bone said. “Reputed the world’s most dangerous weapon.”

Indeed, Gaunt thought. For she saw Skath reaching toward the sword with an expression torn between terror and awe. Her brother crept beside her like a cat tracking a lame bird.

“Ah, now,” Bone said, edging back. “Touching magic is like petting sharks with a bloody hand….”

Skath paused.

But suddenly Skower grabbed her wrist. As she said, “You are not allowed—,” he shoved her hand toward the blade.

What are you doing?” Bone pulled back, but his reflexes were sluggish, and his movement served only to cut Skath’s hand upon one of the hilt’s crystal petals.

Skath gasped and closed her eyes.

“At last,” crowed her obviously insane brother, releasing her. “At last you have hurt yourself. And I only assisted you a little: a minor sin.” He babbled on, switching to the language of Maratrace.

“This city is mad!” Gaunt snapped. “Your own sister—!”

“She is a disappointment to us!” he retorted in Amberhornish. “Mother and Father fight over what to do with her. She has never embraced abyssmitude.”

“Embrace this,” Gaunt said, and backhanded him.

He recoiled, clearly not anticipating her strength, or her willingness to cause another pain. “That is—that is against—”

“I’m not from around here.”

Skower stared into Gaunt’s face, a tear crawling down his cheek, and his peculiar intensity collapsed like a tower of sand. He fled down the stairs.

“Good riddance,” she said, but with little satisfaction, for Skath’s eyes were still closed, as though the girl slept on her feet.

“Perhaps if I splash her?” Bone said, looking at the watering can.

Skath’s eyeballs danced behind shut lids, in a way Gaunt’s bardic teachers had discovered signified dreaming. “Wait,” she said.

Skath’s eyes opened, and she shrieked. Bone backed away, and his elbow bumped the dandelion, knocking it over the side in a spray of shining fluff.

“No,” Skath said, spreading her arms as if sheltering the entire weed garden. She uttered frantic sentences in the tongue of Maratrace, and a few words in Amberhornish: “No, you will not! It’s wrong! Wrong!”

She darted downstairs, whence her brother had gone.

The nonplussed wayfarers saw her sprint down the street, dust rising behind her sandals.

“Ah,” Bone asked, “what just happened?” He held the sword away from his body as though it were a boa constrictor.

“You speak as if I was there,” Gaunt said, rubbing her temples and reconstructing the scene in her mind. “All I can say is, two children just had very strange reactions to a magic sword. Stranger than ours, Bone.”

“Did the Pluribus have a hidden agenda in sending it here?”

“Are deserts dry?”

They watched as Skath collided with the collection of drab-robed people they’d noted earlier—those who supposedly could not harm others, but wanted to. The boy Skower was already among them, leading the drab-robes toward the house.

“Let’s consider this from the local point of view,” Bone ventured. “Two foreigners assault a pair of children in their own home.”

The drab-robes pointed pale fingers at the weed garden.

“I think our work here is done,” Gaunt said. “Shall we descend this fine, angled slope?”

“Well said.”

They began climbing over the wall—and stopped.

“Do you feel what I feel?” Gaunt asked.

“Would that be, dear Gaunt, a sense that it would be wholly impolite for us to flee the lawful authorities?”

“Yes,” she sighed. “But even worse, that it’s shameful to tread our dirty feet over these immaculate walls, when honest folk would use the stairs.”

Bone took a deep breath. “Enough. This time the sword presumes to interfere with our long-term plans. To survive, that is. We will overcome it. On a count of three….”

“Keeping in mind the sinister look of those towers….”

“… Indeed… we vault the wall.”

Bone counted three, and both leaned forward.

And both leaned back.

They stood there, feeling foolish, but unable to move.

“Second plan,” Bone said. “We throw the sword, the authorities claim it. Deed done.”

“Excellent,” Gaunt said.

Bone made to fling the weapon, but instead set the rosy rapier tenderly upon the roof.

“Close enough,” Gaunt said. “Let’s flee.”

They still could not descend the wall. They used the stairs. Progress was slow, leisurely, dignified….

“Bone, I Can’t. Move. Faster.”

“Just keep walking.”

The greater their distance from the Sword of Loving Kindness, the faster their pace. As they reached the front door, the compulsion was released, and finally they could run.

It was almost soon enough.

The doors burst in and six drab-robed figures entered. These assumed the stances of trained unarmed combatants, dropping their centers of gravity and spreading their feet, raising calloused hands and sizing up Gaunt and Bone. Gaunt glimpsed scarifications surrounding hard-looking eyes.

“Downstairs,” Bone said, snaring her elbow like an erratic dance partner. They fled to the dim underground, shouts and snarls behind.

Concluded in Pt. II, in Issue #2


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Chris Willrich lives with his family in the otherworldly environs of Silicon Valley, where he works as a children’s librarian. His fiction has appeared in Asimov’s, Black Gate, Fantasy & Science Fiction, and previously in Beneath Ceaseless Skies. His debut novel, The Scroll of Years, set in the same world as “How the Wicker Knight Would Not Move” and featuring the characters Gaunt and Bone from "The Sword of Loving Kindness," will be released by Pyr Books in Fall 2013. You can find him irregularly on his blog at Goblins in the Library and on Twitter @WillrichChris.

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16 Comments on “The Sword of Loving Kindness, Pt. I”

16 Responses to “The Sword of Loving Kindness, Pt. I”

  1. Bill Ward says:

    10-09-2008, 06:34 PM
    Bill Ward

    I loved it, a great balance of humor and adventure with a great big dollop of sense-of-wonder on top. Reminiscent of Vance and Leiber; I’m greatly looking forward to the second installment.

  2. Brian Dolton says:

    10-10-2008, 10:24 AM
    Brian Dolton

    Yes, I entirely agree; I was very much reminded of Lieber, and the ability to balance a genuine sense of danger with the humour of the sword’s effect impressed the hell out of me.

    Great work, looking forward to the conclusion!

  3. Scott H. Andrews says:

    10-10-2008, 02:31 PM

    Anyone who enjoyed this story should definitely check out Chris’s other Gaunt & Bone and related stories. He recently posted a bibliography of them on the sff.net newsgroup for Black Gate magazine. “Penultima Thule” is my favorite of those, wherein Gaunt and Bone must travel to the edge of the world to try to dispose of Mashed Rags Bound in Dead Cow.

  4. Bill Ward says:

    10-11-2008, 01:21 AM
    Bill Ward

    I’m impressed to see so many of them in F&SF . . . looks like I’ve been picking up the wrong issues of that magazine.

  5. Matthew Wuertz says:

    10-11-2008, 10:18 AM
    Matthew Wuertz

    I’ve read two other Gaunt and Bone stories, so I had high expectations based on how excellent the others were. The first part of this story exceeded those expectations. I can’t wait to read the second part. Keep up the good work, Mr. Willrich!

  6. Carl T. Abt says:

    10-13-2008, 04:04 PM
    Carl T. Abt

    Rant against symbols

    The symbols and imagery didn’t show anything the actions didn’t. They just distracted. They are overused, and are usually the weakest part of any story, but particularly so in this one. The dandelion, for example, interrupted the flow as I tried to make sense of it rather than simply looking at the actions of the girl. Similarly, the tattoo doesn’t say anything that isn’t apparent from the character actions. It’s also a little implausible – who would pick such a symbol to be tattooed on such a public place as their face? Would Gaunt want to be reminded of being trapped by love every time she looks in a mirror, let alone advertise it to the world?

    I’m copying this paragraph from a comment of mine on Sun Magic, Earth Magic:Symbols, even when used perfectly, are still just tools: they are secondary to POV and actions. I tire of interpreting one symbol after another even if they are organic to the story. Too many symbols, no matter how well integrated, smack of artifice – they show the author’s hand. One thing that is commonly lost in contemporary fiction is the place of the writer’s tools – POV is central, not symbols or imagery. As a storyteller, I—as a general rule—only resort to my tools when what my characters do and say is insufficient to express them. I don’t invest too much of myself in my tools.

    That said, the story was a blast to read. I’m just pointing out the weak spots.

  7. Erica Hildebrand says:

    10-13-2008, 04:39 PM
    Erica Hildebrand

    This is my first Gaunt and Bone story and I am loving it. The use of humor, in particular, is really impressive. I eagerly await part 2.

  8. C. C. Finlay says:

    10-13-2008, 06:46 PM
    C. C. Finlay

    I was going to put off reading part 1 of “The Sword of Loving Kindness” until both parts were posted, but tonight I broke down and read it anyway. And now I wished I’d waited! So I wouldn’t have to wait to see how it ends.

    Great debut issue. Really enjoyed it, and was happy to see Gaunt and Bone again.

  9. nihawkins says:

    10-15-2008, 01:32 PM
    nihawkins

    The symbols in question on this thread, to me, are just the lush details inherent in spec fic–they’re a part of world-building, of creating the impression of another place, of bringing to life the setting, which can become a character in itself in fantasy fiction. I think Chris Willrich does this exceedingly well, and it’s one of the reasons I have enjoyed every one of his stories. In fact, when I first read the announcement about the goals of Beneath Ceaseless Skies, Willrich immediately came to mind. This is a great story, and perfectly chosen.

  10. Teddi Deppner says:

    10-15-2008, 07:13 PM
    Teddi Deppner

    A fun romp

    Loved the story.

    First time with the Bone and Gaunt characters, and I thought the story successfully walked the fine line between “I’m lost in these references to other places and adventures” and “ooh! this story is rich with tidbits of history and hints of other stories to track down and read”. I generally enjoy that sense that I’m seeing a piece of a greater world and bigger story, but too many references of that sort can leave one confused. This was just about right.

    The premise of the story provides so much delightful tension and opportunity for comedic contrast and irony, of which Chris seems to take full advantage. I’ll re-read it many times just for those moments.

    (“Language,” Gaunt objected. Then she caught herself, and swore.) LOL!

    (“Each time, I thought, ‘Farewell, wicked tool.’ Only when it’s too late do I weep.”) Not even knowing the character well, I cringed at the loss!

    Good job, Chris, and keep the stories coming!

  11. Scott H. Andrews says:

    10-16-2008, 10:12 AM

    Originally Posted by nihawkins The symbols in question on this thread, to me, are just the lush details inherent in spec fic–they’re a part of world-building, of creating the impression of another place, of bringing to life the setting, which can become a character in itself in fantasy fiction.

    That’s how they feel to me. They aren’t totally without symbolic value for me–I do think it matters that Gaunt has a tattoo of a rose rather than a skull or Bone’s initials :) –but in my head as I read, they are details first and symbols second.

    Quote:In fact, when I first read the announcement about the goals of Beneath Ceaseless Skies, Willrich immediately came to mind. This is a great story, and perfectly chosen.

    Thank you! His work immediately came to my mind as well, and I’m delighted to have this piece for the debut issue. I know you all will love Pt. II next week.

    All of you who’re new to Gaunt and Bone, run do not walk to F&SF’s back-issue ordering page and get copies of their earlier stories. Here’s Chris’s bibliography of them again in case you need it.

  12. Fopner says:

    10-19-2008, 11:53 PM
    Fopner

    Very Fun

    A great opening story and a sure bet to have me read the next issue. Gaunt and Bone are wonderful, witty, and wily. I do hope they escape with their iniquity intact.

    As for symbols, they don’t bother me. I purposefully don’t read into them and just let them operate at a subconsious level.

    Thanks for the story!

  13. Matthew Wuertz says:

    10-23-2008, 08:20 PM
    Matthew Wuertz

    I just finished the second part of the story. I liked getting into the depths of these characters and seeing their inner struggles, especially between the extremes of the sword and Maratrace. Wonderful tale. Simply wonderful.

  14. Carl T. Abt says:

    10-27-2008, 11:54 AM
    Carl T. Abt

    Lessons

    I felt like this story was trying to teach me a lesson. “Be true to yourself” isn’t a bad lesson, but it’s still a lesson. I just want an experience. It was in many respects a good experience as well – lots of action and adventure, and multidimensional characters. I like it when a story changes a character, but does it always have to be for the better? I enjoyed reading the story, but I felt hollow when I put it down because I felt it was trying to teach me something rather than just being itself.

  15. […] chronologically later adventure, “The Sword of Loving Kindness”, is also available at Beneath Ceaseless […]

  16. […] Right now, three of the stories are pretty easy to find. The first one, “The Thief with Two Deaths,” (The Magazine of Fantasy & Science Fiction, June 2000) is reprinted at the back of The Scroll of Years. The next one (by series chronology) is called “The Mermaid and the Mortal Thing” and can be found at Lightspeed Magazine, here. (This is a reprint from Flashing Swords’ special Summer issue in 2008.) The third (again, in series order) is “The Sword of Loving Kindness,” and can be found in two parts beginning here, at Beneath Ceaseless Skies. […]

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